THE FOREST GREEN: BY FATE'S DECREE    
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Friday, July 23rd 2004, by Marissa A Spencer

By Fate's Decree

Whispered ardor in my dreams…
Fiery notes are played for me.
What depths shall I in the vortex fall?
Am I lost by fate's decree?
While your love, like errant sunbeams
Burst forth, enthrall.

I see none but you,
Tho' other faces seek to claim my eyes.
There's no solace in the daytime glow,
Where the light ne'er sees my secret cries.
You dwell inside my heart you know,
No matter what I say or do

While your love, like gentle sunbeams
Burst forth, enthrall.
Fill me up, encompass all
Me and you in wondrous schemes
Whispering ardor in my dreams

Reality shakes the night away.
Your face remains, and the knowledge flows
like devil's smoke 'round my feet.
Love's hunger through the daylight grows
Bringing forth mem'ries sweet
And promises of the waning day.

While your love, like blazing sunbeams
Burst forth, enthrall.
Fill me up, encompass all
Me and you in wondrous schemes
Whispering ardor in our dreams


© July 8, 2000 Marissa A Spencer

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14 comments

24 Jul 2004 @ 04:10 by celestial : skookum
What a lovely poem.
I've never realized how much I love poetry until I met you.
It is perfectly calm here, ah, there is a train whistle in the distance.  

24 Jul 2004 @ 04:27 by spiritseek : sorry
that was just me in the bushes trying to get Marissa's attention...lol. Lovely poem indeed!

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I think I saw the bushes moving lol  

24 Jul 2004 @ 11:40 by bushman : Hmm
Ah, yes, there is fate. :} or }:> one makes the choice, but in the end it's fate that binds us as one. :}  

24 Jul 2004 @ 12:02 by skookum : see.. I knew there
was a bush somewhere lol

yer in mah head agin arentcha bushy lol  

24 Jul 2004 @ 12:14 by bushman : lol
Lets just say , your not alone in the garden of fate. :}  

24 Jul 2004 @ 12:49 by skookum : just don't
leave a pile of pond scum on the bench and I will be happy lol  

24 Jul 2004 @ 14:21 by bushman : Hmm
Without the pond scum, nothing would exist today. :}  

24 Jul 2004 @ 22:21 by spiritseek : cool banter
combine your comments and it will make a cool poem.
"One makes the choice, but in the end it's fate that binds us as one
Lets just say , your not alone in the garden of fate
just don'tleave a pile of pond scum on the bench and I will be happy
Without the pond scum, nothing would exist today."  

24 Jul 2004 @ 22:57 by celestial : Spiritseek
I like the spin you're working.  

24 Jul 2004 @ 23:02 by spiritseek : I like the spin we're in
sounds cool huh?  

25 Jul 2004 @ 09:15 by celestial : Yes indeed it does, Now
Here come the frogs!
And POLYWOGS, teehee  

26 Jul 2004 @ 09:27 by skookum : bushy has polywogs
on his photo site lol  

26 Jul 2004 @ 09:38 by Tim Rowe @81.109.241.105 : Fate
Mmm. Very evocative (nice tree too!!). I've been re-evaluating the whole 'Fate vs Create Your Own Reality' thing recently.  

26 Jul 2004 @ 09:45 by spiritseek : can we tell the difference?
how can we tell if its fate or creating our own reality? Was the reality created before we were born thus making it fate? We now are justing moving along in the dream of that reality which was created before? Deep isn't it?  

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