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 All Right In Middle East3 comments
18 Aug 2004 @ 17:29, by Robert Oveson


every thing is all right in the middle east
say the silent left slinking away in denial
settlers stealing from those with the least
two of the few that fear world court trials
a strong codependent bond deep out of sight
defending a doctrinaire that might is right
and an ocean away a smug suger daddy smiles


defending this doctrine that might is right
two of the few that fear world court trials
hiding a codependent bond deep out of sight
are the silent left slinking away in denial
every thing is all right in the middle east
settlers stealing from those with the least
and an ocean away a smug sugar daddy smiles




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19 Aug 2004 @ 18:41 by ov : Decisions
I keep playing with my little lego bricks of words, building, renovating, and I'm wondering which of these two you like better.  


20 Aug 2004 @ 01:59 by spiritseek : first one
Its just a little easier to follow but still doesn't make a whole lot of sense to me anyways. Sounds like the war in Iraq and the sugar daddy Bush.  


22 Aug 2004 @ 23:04 by ov : All Right
That first one was changed just before I posted it, originally I had the fourth and seventh lines swapped. That pretty much nails it spiritseek, thank you for the input. Hopefully after I've accumulated a few hundred of these there will be a story emerge that makes more sense. As it stands now, without punctuation or capitals, and with deliberately built in ambiguity, these are designed to be adaptable to context.  


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