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 From the low-key weekend jam april 15-16
picture17 Apr 2005 @ 05:02
a little blathering from the weekend's low-key jam

I
how beautiful is the universe
how wide our perception
in this open low - i'm ripe for discovery


II

how mellow?
laid back takes on new relax
fingers lose all grip

sweet weekend bistro low
how cool?
when hot baked bread
lingers in a matter of fact corner
knowing that a crisp loaf
can patiently wait


III

i hear ya, sweet momma
i hear your low-toned beat
as my swamp draggin feet make their own time

it may take me forever
but i'm commin, sweet sistah
to break bread with ya while we still gotta home


IV

DNA playtime
pick a helix, any helix
don't show me,
now put it back on the slide

presto!
changeo
a cloned persona

and there's more where that came from

a helix offers a helluva good time
(we, we, we, we, we, we,...
all concur)



There's more, but that's enough for now.
p.s. -
one person took the time to applaud my careless art! throwing out the words and letting them scatter into their own form. That's low-key poetry!


judih april 17/05  More >

 Stripped of Bullshit
picture11 Apr 2005 @ 03:02

peeled diatribe, stripped of bullshit

one lone human windswept along

small steps going in short directions

mind held intention

curves of a wayward thought

so quick the light flashes, the tears flow, the laughter rings

then one small lifetime

merges back to earth


judih
april 9/05  More >



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