Flowing (Fluyendo) 7 comments

9 Mar 2006 @ 14:14, by Silvia Martínez This poem talks about the flowing of life within us. I wrote it originally in Spanish, but I've also included an english translation. I don't usually make changes in my poems after I've written them, but with this one I made an exception because I felt the need to do so after reading it again a few days ago. Anyway, this is the final version, so it will remain as it is now (well, if you have any suggestion to improve the english version or if there's any grammatical mistake, please feel free to tell me). FLOWING Air flows inside; willful torrent exhaling breath of restrained emotion; hurricane that the sand stirs in search of lost illusions. Waves flow inside; lonely, the energy embraces the tree trunk; chords of hope blossom amidst the lyre murmur. And poetry flows, the path inside the soul, echo of a verse still resounding. Between Heaven, Earth and me life is flowing... -------- FLUYENDO Fluye dentro el aire; torrente intencionado que exhala aliento de emoción contenida; huracán que la arena remueve en busca de ilusiones perdidas. Fluyen dentro las olas, al tronco del árbol solitaria se abraza la energía; acordes de esperanza nacen entre el rumor de la lira. Y fluye la poesía, dentro del alma el camino, eco de un verso que aún vibra. Entre el cielo, la tierra y el Yo fluye la vida... ---------- Silvia Martínez, March 2006

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9 Mar 2006 @ 15:56 by judih : silvia
the work is very lyrical
to play with the english would be to re-write, to change the flow...ah and such a flow.

(just take out one of the 'r's in stir)

beautiful piece  

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